Wednesday 15 April 2015

Creative Writing - Tilly Butler (Year 3)

Macy was a detective, who had a lovely personality and was a kind friend to all. She loved having adventures, being sporty and making others happy. Her favourite things were, family, friends and her job as a detective. She has long straight hair and brilliant brown eyes. Wherever she went her friends smiled and waved. Her mum and dad had died when she was two years old so she lived alone in a cosy cottage up on the hill. She was watching TV with her friends Lilly, Rosa, Roxy, Harry and Merrida. Suddenly a flash advert came on and it said “all the detectives need to come the king court to be picked for a mission”. And Macy got picked to go.
Despite her protests they forced her on a boat and led her to the middle of nowhere. She stepped onto the boiling hot desert and saw some crusty, dry leaves coming from a mouldy tree trunk with blood on and a dolphin laying next to it clicking sadly. Macy gently lifted it up and lay it down in the sea. After a while she felt lonely and miserable. Meanwhile a bloodthirsty pirate was watching her and licking his lips…

Then there was a crash! Then a bang! So she went deeper inside the desert to investigate some more. When she got there looming above her was a ship called: Slippery Squid. Little did she know it belonged to the venomous pirate, the one who was watching her earlier on. As she slowly tiptoed onto the deck she saw two bloodshot eyes staring at her with pure hatred. She realised that they belonged to him, “ROAAAARRR!!!!!” He yelled as he jumped on her. He grabbed her and threw her into a dark, dark, dusty cellar locked the door and went out. Then the pirate, that had a stone cold heart inside him, teased from outside the cellar.

Days passed and she got more and more lonely. The only person she saw was the ugly old pirate who bought her dry bread and dirty water. She soon grew weak and cold. The stone cold cellar was held up by dirty messy wooden planks but it was locked by a special key that was kept  on the pirates lock on the side of the door. On the 32nd  day of being locked up she heard a knock and a whisper “Macy it’s Rosa and Roxy we've come too save you”. “ There's a lock that has a key dangling by it. Unlock it and I’ll be free” Macy replied. Click snap creek. Macy  saw open air for the first time in ages. They quickly ran away, an angry pirates racing behind them. Luckily he tripped and couldn't get them in time so Macy, Rosa and Roxy got back home.


When they got there they found an anxious crowd waiting for them. The king was shaking his head gravely and muttering to himself. At the sight of them everyone cheered and clapped their hands together. All of them had a whale of the time, But the pirates twin brother was not a person that was happy.

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