Wednesday 15 April 2015

Persuasive Writing - Sophie Lorimer

Monday, 5th March

Can I write an argument?

According to the government children should have homework after school. I am arguing that children should have homework after school.

It teaches children to work independently and work together. If a child does not work it is their own fault for example if all the children do their work they will get good grades and if they get good grades they will get good jobs but if children don’t work they won’t get good grades or good jobs.

Everyone knows that homework improves children’s thinking ability and yes they should have a break but they could do their homework a little bit everyday so that they do get a break and do their homework.

Homework makes children look after things and care for things. It’s a fact that if children don’t do their homework they won’t look after things and clearly if they don’t look after things when they go up to secondary school teachers will get annoyed that a child has either lost his homework or can’t find it.

Hundreds of people agree that when children grow up they can teach their little brothers or sisters or even their children! Loads of children don’t go to school and children who do go to school should be pleased that they go to school.

In summary hundreds of people don’t have good jobs. Do you really won’t your children to be one of them, surely everyone can see that we are trying to teach children not torture them so if you have read this please think about your children. Do you really want them them to be this way. Anyway it’s your choice not mine.


By Sophie Lorimer     

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